The writer's block
- Thread starter CrazyYoshimitsu
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Malice
Administrator
I know this is the internet and all, but you got to holla at Microsoft Word and press F7. Even Firefox has spell check.
Is this what you submitted verbatim or did you type this in a hurry to post on here? Look at some of the words used in that wall of text:
essaies
Islamica
increaseing
dwork
modren
esare (WTF is this word?)
edycation
If you want to improve, then you need to start by posting work that's not laden with mistakes, at least on here since this is all I have to go by. If you want to stick with writing, then it would benefit you to take a typing class which will cut the mistakes while you type. I'm not going to attempt to correct grammar when the spelling is so jacked up.
As for the Iranians, they were better off under their own democracy until the US toppled their democracy and installed the Shah. And anything before the Islamic Revolution is dramatically better than what's currently going on in Iran where the country is now ran by the Revolutionary Guard. Also, Mahmoud Ahmadinejad, not Mohammed Ahmadinejad doesn't have any real power. He's basically a figurehead.
Is this what you submitted verbatim or did you type this in a hurry to post on here? Look at some of the words used in that wall of text:
essaies
Islamica
increaseing
dwork
modren
esare (WTF is this word?)
edycation
If you want to improve, then you need to start by posting work that's not laden with mistakes, at least on here since this is all I have to go by. If you want to stick with writing, then it would benefit you to take a typing class which will cut the mistakes while you type. I'm not going to attempt to correct grammar when the spelling is so jacked up.
As for the Iranians, they were better off under their own democracy until the US toppled their democracy and installed the Shah. And anything before the Islamic Revolution is dramatically better than what's currently going on in Iran where the country is now ran by the Revolutionary Guard. Also, Mahmoud Ahmadinejad, not Mohammed Ahmadinejad doesn't have any real power. He's basically a figurehead.
The Landslide
[13] Hero
I'm going to fall for the joke and actually try to help you.
1. Re-read everything you write twice. At LEAST twice. Every good writer does this.
2. Read what you write out loud, sometimes this helps you find things that don't work or make sense. For example, if your run out of breath three times before the end of a sentence its a sign that the sentence is too long.
3. Make sure at least two other people read what you write before you are satisfied with it.
4. For spelling errors, webster.com is a good fast pick off the top of my head.
And that is a start.
1. Re-read everything you write twice. At LEAST twice. Every good writer does this.
2. Read what you write out loud, sometimes this helps you find things that don't work or make sense. For example, if your run out of breath three times before the end of a sentence its a sign that the sentence is too long.
3. Make sure at least two other people read what you write before you are satisfied with it.
4. For spelling errors, webster.com is a good fast pick off the top of my head.
And that is a start.
Pocky-Yoshi
[14] Master
CrazyYoshimitsu, take your time and edit your writing.
Unless you're one of those "procrastinators" or "get it done now" people.
But know this: college will eat you alive if you aren't "editful".
Especially in writing.....
Unless you're one of those "procrastinators" or "get it done now" people.
But know this: college will eat you alive if you aren't "editful".
Especially in writing.....
