Moonlight Revelation

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(Z is not in this)

Abigail Ferdinand

After gaining powers from wish she made at a lake that doesn't exist. Having the power to create anything with the right materials she's a master black smith and engineer. Years of perfecting this gift of her's, she was given the task by Faith to craft a crown, sword and grail for her as the new queen of the sky realm. Abigail accepts this and only asks for that she find all the ingredients by herself since this would her master piece from all the years of crafting. Faith agrees to the condition and leaves Abby to travel between realms to find all the pieces to build an elegant sword, an astonishing grail and a matching crown.

I just made this right now

need the input!
 
well, first thing is that there needs to be a way how Abby and Faith meet up in the first place. second, is that I don't think Faith needs a grail, sword, or crown. (The crown maybe but it could be any type of head piece really.) Faith already has the swords. and i don't even know what a grail would be used for. maybe find something different to tie in Abigail to Faith. That's the biggest thing at the moment. where is the place that would put her in the story's path. why is she there? does she know anyone else that may be connected to the main story? if so then how? like i said before. the story is starting off in Japan. then jumping to the Sky Kingdom (maybe England to visit Elisa and them) before starting off to the different realms.
 
OKAY! Time to revise it then.

well I want Abigail to be noted as a great young black smith trying to create her masterpiece.
I don't want to change her back story
 
MorrowsWings said:
OKAY! Time to revise it then.

well I want Abigail to be noted as a great young black smith trying to create her masterpiece.
I don't want to change her back story
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you don't have to change her back story. blacksmithing is useful. for example.

guns can be used on regular people. regular guns however do not work on people with shields. (shield formed from powers)
Swords or other melee weapons easily break the shield because the shield can't hold back a large focus area. (i.e. small focuses are things like bullets, darts, and other small projectiles.)
swords and other melee weapons, on the occasion of facing a sorcerer/sorceress do not work on their shields. it takes another magical force to break their defenses. magical swords and guns of course work but these items are quite rare. the only people, as of now to possess such items are

Faith (Twilight's sword)
Kanna (Short elemental sword)
Elisa (Dual pistols passed down from her father)
Zepher (The second and last set of dual handguns. only retain the fire element)
Snyder (Ice element large sword)
Yu (the blade that Evilyn gave to him)
 
0VincentRayne0 said:
you don't have to change her back story. blacksmithing is useful. for example.
Faith (Twilight's sword)
Kanna (Short elemental sword)
Elisa (Dual pistols passed down from her father)
Zepher (The second and last set of dual handguns. only retain the fire element)
Snyder (Ice element large sword)
Yu (the blade that Evilyn gave to him)
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Abigail on a quest to make magical items!

She'll make magical items and Faith doesn't want them to fall in the wrong hands!!!!!!!!!!
 
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