8wayrun's poetry block

[LKV]

Irises in June
To see them is magical
Fall is here today


Autumn winds do blow
Leaves scattered and golden brown
Winter awaits us.

these are good. i always felt that haikus should be in two sections-- the first two lines set the image, while the last line transforms it and kinda comes out of nowhere. this is most (only?) effective when the last line is a phrase on its own, like what you did here. me likes.


here's a haiku i saw on a t-shirt from threadless which i really liked:

haikus are easy
but they don't always make sense
refrigerator

:D

 

[Ghengis_John]

I found your calling...

Here, write these.

LOL my thoughts exactly. Not that anythigng was wrong with your poem. It's professional caliber to be sure.

 

[Bamboo_Wind]

^You used your signature and made it into a poem. That's cool.

I ... kind of. I wrote a haiku and used it as my sig, then found this thread :)

these are good. i always felt that haikus should be in two sections-- the first two lines set the image, while the last line transforms it and kinda comes out of nowhere. this is most (only?) effective when the last line is a phrase on its own, like what you did here. me likes.

Thanks :)

 

[SolarWind]

Bamboo and Shogun got the best poems in this thread so far.
Come on guys, step your game up. Be poetic. lol. XD.

 

[Bamboo_Wind]

The battle ensues.
Soul Calibur scrubs unite.
Virtue defeats rage.