The writer's block

Destinizish said:
You're taking an "english/history" class? Well, his grading seems more based on the argument anyhow, so I'll just assume this was a history essay.


I also don't know what you're asking for here, CY. You throw in so many typos, and you're correcting the stuff you messed up on for us in parenthesis. (Outside of massive typos that is.) Even then, some of the parenthesis aren't legible. I mean, "lol I the O is esare from my paper, even though I remember putting it there." is hardly something I can decipher.

But I can give you one answer as it's the only actual question you asked: it is by at the end of the fourth paragraph. You wouldn't say someone is respected from another group of people. They are respected by a different group of people.
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It's takes a while to explain friend. And sorry if it's got hard to read. And wanted t oshow the hard copy of it too. I'm still working on getting better at my writing. Thanks for the feedback.
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Malice said:
I know this is the internet and all, but you got to holla at Microsoft Word and press F7. Even Firefox has spell check.

Is this what you submitted verbatim or did you type this in a hurry to post on here? Look at some of the words used in that wall of text:

essaies
Islamica
increaseing
dwork
modren
esare (WTF is this word?)
edycation

If you want to improve, then you need to start by posting work that's not laden with mistakes, at least on here since this is all I have to go by. If you want to stick with writing, then it would benefit you to take a typing class which will cut the mistakes while you type. I'm not going to attempt to correct grammar when the spelling is so jacked up.

As for the Iranians, they were better off under their own democracy until the US toppled their democracy and installed the Shah. And anything before the Islamic Revolution is dramatically better than what's currently going on in Iran where the country is now ran by the Revolutionary Guard. Also, Mahmoud Ahmadinejad, not Mohammed Ahmadinejad doesn't have any real power. He's basically a figurehead.
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LOl that what happens when you type late at night. Sorry about that. thsoe misspelling were not on the hard copy o the paper. That was my mistake And I can see what you mean by that. But I feel a modren economy was better than getting ya fucking eyes rip out.
 
pineapplejuice said:
What? no one's got any sc fan fiction's to post?
And yeah CY, I like your enthusiasm for writing, but please learn decent grammar and spelling or no one will give you the time of day.
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I already have that friend. That's just my lazyness taking affect. When I wrote that paper I was while fucking awake. So, i think it's my fault for not mentioning how tired I was. But I wouldn't have gotten an A, if I misspel all those words wrong, right? Think logically about, sir. Also ID, I am in the 10th grade.

PJ: Once again, I was tired. Think logcailly friend. Logic makes the world go around.
 
I'm sorry CY you seem like a nice guy, and you seem to like writing, and good luck with it. But all I've seen of your writing is stupid mistakes, and all it takes is reading through it once to sort it out.
Sorry, it's just frustrating to read that's all. You could write the greatest story ever told, but if your spelling is bad, it'll just be treated as a joke.
 
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