CrazyYoshimitsu
[10] Knight
Got a poem you wanna say? Well you have came to the right the place. Post what on your mind in this thread. But let's kick thigns off with me
A shadow you can't see
He lies in the night waiting for his pery. The night moves like he mvoes, lighting quick as a Ceetah. Sweat falls from his face as he grabs hsi sword. His target is a very well respected Pmip, that owns many Whorehouse.( Funny thing my teacher didn't mark off points for this line.) He near his target's location, that is heavily arm with deadly traps, and high rank Samuris. The wind follow his ever move as he avoided all the traps, and killing Samuris with his Surikens( Is that how you spell it?), and blow gun's darts. The night skies were slient as a mouse eating cheese. But as he continues thoguh the hall ways of his target's location. He was spotted by 6 very powerful Samuris. These 6 Samuris trap our friend by a waall. Ready to move into for the kill. Our little friend pulls out an egg cover black paint on it, and hurl its at his foes. Smoke flew everywhere, and when everything clear up. Our little friend move lie klighting, and took hsi target done wit hgreat pace, and made him escape When he return back to the dojo hsi master was please with his work. And ask him about his enemies. And the shadow warrior responses like this" My foes coudln't see the feets of their own shadow."
DONE!!! What do you guys think? If you didn't notice, I added a little fat to my peom because the one I got back lack a little detail, so I added some more. I hoep you enjoy it.
Also no hates allowed!!
A shadow you can't see
He lies in the night waiting for his pery. The night moves like he mvoes, lighting quick as a Ceetah. Sweat falls from his face as he grabs hsi sword. His target is a very well respected Pmip, that owns many Whorehouse.( Funny thing my teacher didn't mark off points for this line.) He near his target's location, that is heavily arm with deadly traps, and high rank Samuris. The wind follow his ever move as he avoided all the traps, and killing Samuris with his Surikens( Is that how you spell it?), and blow gun's darts. The night skies were slient as a mouse eating cheese. But as he continues thoguh the hall ways of his target's location. He was spotted by 6 very powerful Samuris. These 6 Samuris trap our friend by a waall. Ready to move into for the kill. Our little friend pulls out an egg cover black paint on it, and hurl its at his foes. Smoke flew everywhere, and when everything clear up. Our little friend move lie klighting, and took hsi target done wit hgreat pace, and made him escape When he return back to the dojo hsi master was please with his work. And ask him about his enemies. And the shadow warrior responses like this" My foes coudln't see the feets of their own shadow."
DONE!!! What do you guys think? If you didn't notice, I added a little fat to my peom because the one I got back lack a little detail, so I added some more. I hoep you enjoy it.
Also no hates allowed!!
